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how to write good reviews What is the purpose of this flash? The purpose of this flash is to not only try and improve the review quality of users, but at the same time help and try to eliminate some users from writing abusive reviews, which prevents bans and deletion of reviews. |
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what should a review contain? If you notice many reviews consist of, "This was awesome" or "This sucks do better". These aren't reviews. They are just comments. A review should tell the author what to improve on, what you liked, what you didn't like, and if at all possible what the author could do to improve their flash. When I write reviews I like to separate them into sections. This allows your review to be more organized and easier to read, which in the long run makes your review more helpful to the author. When I write my reviews I like to break them up into the following sections. Animation / Graphics - Here you talk about how the quality, the smoothness, and the color. Write if it looks good and whether better colors could have been used. If you are experienced in flash you can give tips on how to improve the animation. Continues in next page |
what should a review contain? Ex. - Animation / Graphics - It was nice to see a little bit of animation in your dress up game. That is something that is missing from most games like that. Maybe you could add a couple other animated things next time you make a dress up game. Also, the drawings were done pretty good. Not the best I have ever seen, but again pretty good. Story - Here you write about the quality of the story. Was it good and did it make sense? Also, was it interesting? If it is suppose to be random or is suppose to prove a point then rate it on how well its random or how well it proves it's point. If it's a game that doesn't have a story behind it then rate on how easy the controls were and whether it could have been longer, have more levels, etc.. Ex - Story - There really isn't much of a story. It's just your generic dress-up game. It does look like you were going for more of the heavy metal style here. The controls were also very easy to use since all they were was click your mouse and drag. Continues in next page |
what should a review contain? Audio - This is more important than some people think. Was there sound? If so just write about it. Write about the quality and whether it ran well together with the flash or not. Ex - Audio - Heavy metal alright man! I recommend putting some other choices of songs on there too with a menu so people can select from different songs. Audio is always a big plus when making a dress up game. It really adds to the overall quality. Overall - This is the category where you describe what you think about the flash overall. Write about your final thoughts of the flash, etc.. Ex - Overall, not bad. It's a pretty good especially for a first time dress up game. I recommend you make another one, or maybe update this one with some of the effects and things that I mentioned. I'm sure the score of this flash would go up a little, or your next one would have a higher score. I will also recommend it to the dress up collection. Don't follow my guidelines exactly if you don't want. Adjust it to your style and start writing helpful reviews. |
what makes this helpful? This review is helpful because the reviewer stated what he liked and what he didn't like about the flash. He also stated what he thought could of been done to make the flash better. |
what makes this useless? This review is useless because he really isn't reviewing the movie. He is just stating an opinion on whether he liked it or not, but didn't include why he disliked it or what could of been done to make the flash better. |
what makes this abusive? This review is abusive because the reviewer talks about the author instead of the flash. The review space isn't used to review the author, only the flash. He also uses blam in a negative way. |
thanks for watching! Flash put together by: Phil All writing in tutorial: Corky52 Idea: Corky52 |
ActionScript [AS1/AS2]
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